Chayne Saw
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 |  Subject: Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo) Mon Jul 06, 2009 8:44 pm | |
| --It´s raining in a dark night--
...I can even hear her saying “Yes” as I remember her in the white dress..
…smiling at me with wet eyes that are as deep as the ocean…
*Just like the pearls that are running down the window*
… We went out of the church…
… People come and shake our hands…
We drink champagne and 5 minutes later we are sitting in our car..
…I can even hear the noise of the tins on the back of…
*BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM*
WHAT THE…?
OH NO…WHAT THE?
BLOOD EVERYWHERE…
IS IT MINE???
… I´m touching my head…
…searching for a wound..
But there is nothing
..I lean forward..
And recognize that my front window is nearly totally destroyed…
I take a look at the front of my car…
Blood all over it and the I see..
I see her…
I see…
Someone: Mr. Saw?
Someone: MR SAW?
Chayne: …What?....umm Sorry I´m a bit tired of the travel”
Someone: No Problem Sir..
*...I gotta get that outta my head…gotta get a new start..not just for me even for…*
Someone: Mr Saw?...The commissioner wants to see you now
--Not just for me…yeah …not just for me--[/b]
Chayne: ..Thank you
I get up from the seed and recently a dark and cold shower runs down my neck…I look at the window…and...
…It´s raining in a dark night…
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Sommerlund
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| | Subject: Re: Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo) Mon Jul 06, 2009 8:54 pm | |
| RPs aren't written in first person, just so you know  | |
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Bunkhouse Joker
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| | Subject: Re: Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo) Thu Jul 09, 2009 11:21 am | |
| - Sommerlund wrote:
- RPs aren't written in first person, just so you know
Im pretty sure there writing in 3rd person | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo) Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:24 pm | |
| No he isn't the mention of I is a first person quality, he or she or it is a third person quality |
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