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Chayne Saw

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PostSubject: Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo)   Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo) EmptyMon Jul 06, 2009 8:44 pm

--It´s raining in a dark night--


...I can even hear her saying “Yes” as I remember her in the white dress..
…smiling at me with wet eyes that are as deep as the ocean…


*Just like the pearls that are running down the window*

… We went out of the church…
… People come and shake our hands…
We drink champagne and 5 minutes later we are sitting in our car..
…I can even hear the noise of the tins on the back of…



*BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM*

WHAT THE…?

OH NO…WHAT THE?

BLOOD EVERYWHERE…

IS IT MINE???


… I´m touching my head…
…searching for a wound..
But there is nothing

..I lean forward..
And recognize that my front window is nearly totally destroyed…

I take a look at the front of my car…
Blood all over it and the I see..

I see her…

I see…




Someone: Mr. Saw?

Someone: MR SAW?

Chayne: …What?....umm Sorry I´m a bit tired of the travel”

Someone: No Problem Sir..

*...I gotta get that outta my head…gotta get a new start..not just for me even for…*

Someone: Mr Saw?...The commissioner wants to see you now

--Not just for me…yeah …not just for me--[/b]

Chayne: ..Thank you

I get up from the seed and recently a dark and cold shower runs down my neck…I look at the window…and...


…It´s raining in a dark night…


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PostSubject: Re: Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo)   Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo) EmptyMon Jul 06, 2009 8:54 pm

RPs aren't written in first person, just so you know Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo)   Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo) EmptyThu Jul 09, 2009 11:21 am

Sommerlund wrote:
RPs aren't written in first person, just so you know Razz

Im pretty sure there writing in 3rd person
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PostSubject: Re: Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo)   Chayne Saw Gimmick (Promo) EmptyThu Jul 09, 2009 12:24 pm

No he isn't the mention of I is a first person quality, he or she or it is a third person quality
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